技巧分析：英语四六级写作"功能段落法"示例思维导图

Directions：Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicTheImpactoftheInternetonInterpersonalCommunication.Youarerequiredtogiveabriefdescriptionofthecartoonandthencommentonit.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsbutnomorethan200words.

点评：2012年6月份考到了较为少见的图画评论式作文，要求先对图画进行简要描述，再对图画所描述现象进行评论。

此次作文，内容方面上有两项有求：图画描述+根据图画内容评论主题

针对该次作文，阅卷中发现跑题同学不在少数，主要有以下几种类型：

此类全英文命题形式在答题时考生可根据题目"内容要求"先自拟三个汉语提纲，然后再依照提纲去写相应的"功能段落"，这样全英文命题与传统作文就没有差异了。提纲如下：

TheImpactoftheInternetonInterpersonalCommunication

首段：(图画描述：现象)

Givenisacartoonwhichillustratesaratherinterestingscene:thefather,sittinginsofa,asksabouthisdaughter'sschoollife,withanexpectationoftalkingwithher;however,tohisdisappointment,thegirlsimplyrespondswitharejection:"Youcanreadallaboutitonmyblog."

利弊段：分析网络对人际交流的利弊

ThiscartooncanbenaturallyassociatedwithimpactsofInternetoninterpersonalcommunication.(图画联系主题)Ontheonehand,Internetbringsusgreatconvenienceandhelpsustoremovetheobstaclesofdistanceincommunication.ItisInternetthatenablespeopleindifferentplacestokeepintouchwitheachother.WithoutInternet,itisimpossibleforthemtokeepinstantcontactwithothers.(利)Ontheotherhand,thisphenomenonisparticularlyworthconcernforthebackgroundthatpeople,likethedaughterincartoon,mayfocustoomucheyesightonInternet,totallyturningablindeyetoface-to-facecommunication.WhatworriesmanyexpertsisthatInterpersonalcommunicationmaybealienatedandindifferent.(弊)

现象总结+建议

Incontemporarysociety,ithasbecomeatrendforpeopletocommunicateviaInternet.Meanwhile,anincreasingnumberofindividualsdeemitconvenient,fastandfashionabletochatonline.(现象)However,Iamconvincedthatweshouldeducate,advocateandencourageourfriends,classmatesandacquaintancestospendmoretimetalkingorchattingfacetoface.(建议)Dobearinmind:Internetismerelyatool.(222words)