Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Campus Security. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the ou
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Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopicCampusSecurity.Youshouldwriteatleast120words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:
【思路点拨】本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要求阐述目前校园里出现的一种问题,提纲第2点要求提供解决办法,由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。根据所给提纲,本文应包含以下内容:阐述“目前校园意外事件不断出现”这一问题,校园安全问题备受关注的现状;我们应当采取哪些措施来应对;总结全文。
【参考范文】CampusSecurity
Securityissuemaysoundclichéd,butwhenitcomestothecampussecurity,wehavetotakeitseriously.Nearlyeveryday,therearereportstothesecurityofficeoncampusthatvaluablethingsarestolenaway.Asurroundingwithstealing,muggingcan’tbeworseforstudying.Insuchcases,whatmeasuresshouldbetakentoimprovethecampussecurity?
Ontheonehand,westudentsshouldstrengthenoursecurityawareness.Oncewesmelloutsomethingunusual,weshouldreportittothecampusguardimmediately.Ontheotherhand,moreequipmentsuchasmonitorsshouldbeinstalledoncampussoastodetectcrimesassoonaspossible.Besides,aproperamountofsecurityguardsshouldbearrangedtopatrolthecampus。
Inmyopinion,campussecuritywillbeimprovedaslongaseffortsaremadeoncampus.Thereforecollegesanduniversitiesshouldtrytheirbesttomakeeveryoneoncampussafeandsound。(总结观点段)