2017年12月英语四级高分范文（二）思维导图

【思路点拨】本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种新兴事物，提纲第2点针对该事物提出一种有争议的观点，提纲第3点要求表明“我”是否同意这种观点，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述电子辞典和翻译软件的使用现状，引出机器翻译会代替人工翻译的观点;表明“我”对这一观点的态度并说明理由;总结“我”的观点，提出建议。

【参考范文】MachineTranslationandHumanTranslation

Inrecentyears,allkindsofelectronicdictionariesandtranslationsoftwarehavebeendeveloped.Withthedevelopmentoftechnology,theseelectronicdictionariesandsoftwarecanhelpustranslatenotonlywordsandphrasesbutevensentencesandparagraphs.Sosomepeoplecometotheconclusionthatmachinetranslationwillreplacetraditionalhumantranslation.However,Icouldn’tagreewiththisargument。

Admittedly,translationmachinesandsoftwarebringmuchconvenienceforourstudyandourwork.Withthem,weneedn’tbothertoleafthroughtheheavydictionaries.However,machinetranslationhasitsdisadvantages.First,generallyspeaking,translationsoftwareonlycangivedirecttranslation,whichissometimesnotinaccordancewiththeoriginalarticlesinlogicandmeaning.Second,somepeopledependonelectronicdictionariesandsoftwaretoomuch,whichisunfavorabletotheirimprovementinlanguageability。

Consideringtheabove-mentioned,Ithinkthatmachinetranslationcannotreplacehumantranslation,butitisagoodcomplementarytohumantranslation.Therefore,weshouldcombinemachinetranslationwithhumantranslationefficiently。