2017年12月英语四级高分范文（九）思维导图

【思路点拨】本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要求描述一次事件的经过，提纲第2点要求对事件进行评论，由此可判断本文应为记叙文。根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：交待事件背景;描述扒窃事件的经过和最后结果;谴责这种不文明的现象，提出解决建议。

【参考范文】AWitnessofaTheftIncident

Yesterday,Iwitnessedatheftincidentonmywayhome.Thethiefwassorampantthatitleftmeaverydeepimpression。

Itwasintherushhour,whenmanypeoplewerebuyingticketsatthesubwaystation.Awomantookherpurseoutandpaidfortheticket.Thensheputherpursebackintoherbagandturnedtoleave,whenamid-agedmanbrushedpasthermuttering“Excuseme”.Shedidn’tfeelunusualandwentintothestation.Indeed,herpursehadbeenstolenbythatman.Tooursurprise,thethiefseemsnottobenervousatallandevenbegantolookothersupanddown.Maybehewassearchingforthenexttarget.Atthattimesomepersons,includingme,witnessedtheprocess.Butunfortunately,noonedaredtowarnthatwoman。

Thisincidentmakesmeashamedandleavesmeadeepthought.Thepickpockethasposedagreatthreattoresidents’andvisitors’propertysafety.Undoubtedly,itisanurgentthingtotakeactiontopreventpickpocket.However,itcannotdependonthepoliceonly.Instead,itneedsourcommonefforts.Wecannotshutoureyesandmouthstothepickpocketanymore.Itshouldbekeptinourmindsthatourforcesarefarbeyondthosethieves。