2017年12月英语四级高分范文（十八）思维导图

【思路点拨】本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析导致这种现象的原因，提纲第3点要求说明该现象可能带来的影响，由此可推知本文应为现象解释型作文。根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述近年来企业热衷于举办大学生音乐节、校园歌手大赛的现象;分析导致这种现象的原因;说明该现象可能带来的影响。

【参考范文】CommercializationofCampusMusic

Inrecentyears,campusmusichasbeencommercializedgradually.Moreandmoreenterprisesareinterestedinbeingthesponsorsofcollegemusicfestivalsorawardcompetitionsofcampussingers.Campussingersandsongsarenotconfinedtocollegecampusanymorebutbeingpushedtothemarketgradually。

Thefollowingfactorscanaccountforthisphenomenon.Ontheonehand,someenterprises’payingmoreattentiontocampusmusicisoutoftheirsenseofcommitmenttothesociety.Theywanttosethealthyenterpriseimagesbeforethepublic.Ontheotherhand,nowadaysentertainmentmarketingisverypopular.Enterpriseswanttoutilizeentertainmentactivitiestoimprovetheirnotabilityandinfluence.Collegestudents,asthefocusofthewholesociety,areagoodchoicefortheseenterprises.Ofcourse,thesemusicalactivitieshavebroughtmorechancesforcampussingerstoshowtheirtalentstothepublic.Besides,campussongshavegottenmorewidespreading.However,commercializationofcampusmusictosomeextentreducesitsuniqueness.Inducedbyfameandwealth,somecampussingerstrytocatertothetastesofthepublicandlosttheirownstylesgradually。

Therefore,inordertomakecampusmusicdevelopmorehealthily,boththesponsorsofmusicactivitiesandourcampussingersshouldpaymoreattentiononmusicitselfbutnotprofits。