2015年12月英语四级作文预测：延迟退休思维导图
话题3：延迟退休 Directions：For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should Retirement Age Be Postponed? You’d write at least 120 words but no mo
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话题3：延迟退休
Directions：Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledShouldRetirementAgeBePostponed?You’dwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.Yourwritingshouldbebasedonthefollowingoutline.
1.近年来，推迟退休年龄引发人们热议
2.推迟退休年龄有利也有弊
3.我的看法
BasedonarecentsurveyontheInternet,amajorityofindividualsadmitthatagingsocietywillbringavarietyofproblemstotheirlife.Alongwiththetrendoflongevity,ithasbecomeatrendforpeopletodebatewhetheritiswisetopostponeretirementage.
Anumberofindividualsfavorpostponingtheretirementage.Intheireyes,itisthispolicythatenablestheagingsocietytobuildupenoughwork-force.Asamatteroffact,peopleinmountingnumbershavecometorealizethisprobleminanagingsociety.Evenso,othersholdadifferentviewthatpostponingretirementagecarriessomerisks.Thispolicycanbringoldpeoplestress,butcannotarousetheirenthusiasmforwork,andcannothelpthemtoenjoytheirretirementpension.
Iamconvincedthatweshouldtakeintoaccountthewishesofoldpeople.Ifthoseseniorshaveenthusiasmforwork,weshouldeducate,advocateandencouragethemtoworkandperformtheirtasks;ifnot,itisadvisableforthesocietytocreateacomfortabletwilightforthem.Ifwetryourutmosttodoso,thefutureofoldpeople’lifewillbepromisingandhopeful.(187words)
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