2015年12月英语四级作文预测：老年人孤独生活思维导图

PartIWriting(30minutes)

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay.Youshouldstartyouressaywithabriefdescriptionofthepictureandthenexpressyourviewsonthelonelylifeofagedpeople.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.

Givenisasimplebutthought-provokingcartoon:anagedgrandmasitsinfrontofmirror,lookingat"herself"inthemirrorandsayingtoherself,"Ifeelratherlonelywhenmysongoestoworkandmygrandsonstudiesinschool."

首句功能为：引出图画;之后为图画内容描述，主要是四要素：人/物、动作、文字和环境，写出四要素中的两三点即可。

Obviously,thiscartooncanbenaturallyassociatedwiththesignificanceofchildren’saccompanyforagedparents:ifelderlypeopleintendtoenjoyhappiness,itisadvisablefortheirchildrentospendmoretimeinparents.Incontemporarysociety,ithasbecomeatrendforyoungpeopletobebusywiththeirworkandstudy.Meanwhile,anincreasingnumberofyoungstersfinditdifficulttohavesparetimetoaccompanylonelyparents.However,itisadultchildren’saccompanythatenablesagedparentstobuildupadequatehope,loveandenthusiasmforlife.Asamatteroffact,youngpeopleinlargenumbershavenotcometorealizethelonelinessofagedpeople.

二段首句：图画联系主题;之后if句为图画简单评论;incontemporarysociety一句为图画所暗含的社会现象;meanwhile一句为相关人+具体感受;however之后为强调句式，论述意义;尾句是万能总结。

Asayoungster,Iamconvincedthatitisofgreatnecessityforustoaccompanyagedparents,nomatterhowbusyweare.Accordingly,weshouldeducate,advocateandencourageourfriends,classmatesandacquaintancestolove,respectandcareallelderlypeople.(196words)

尾段首句：观点;二句建议;尾句展望未来。

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