2022年大学英语六级满分作文赏析：你喜欢健康还是财富思维导图

HealthandWealth,WhichDoYouPrefer?

"Healthiswealth!".Thisisanoldsayingwhichthemajorityapplaud.Asarule,thewealthieryouare,theweakerisyourhealth,butthiscannotbeappliedtoall.

Tobeginwith,apersonthathashealthcanaffordtochallengeallhardships.Forexample,manualworkersareusuallystoutandenergetic.Withtheirenergy,theyearntheirliving.Althoughsuchanoccupationbringslittlerewardascomparedwiththeenergytheyhaveexerted,theyenjoylifewhateverthingsmaybe.

Moreover,businessisbasedonhealth.Studentsingoodhealthcanabsorbknowledgemorereadily.Ingoodhealth,scientistscantacklecomplextechnicalproblemsandachievemoresuccess.

Frequentlywefindmillionairesclingclosetotheirdoctorsfortheyseldomhaveenoughexercisestobringforthbetterhealth.Theirlackofexercisesslackensthereadinessofgrowthoftheantibodiestoresisttheattackofdiseases.So,myargueisthathealthismoreimportantthanwealthforifwedonothavehealth,whatcanwebenefitfromwealth?

·Healthiswealth

*Morewealth,weakerhealth

·Goodhealthcanaffordtochallengeallhardships,e.g.

*Manualworkers

*Businessmen

*Students

*Scientists

*Millionaireslackhealth

·Conclusion

Nohealth,nowealth

本文是一篇议论文,文中作者的观点鲜明,全文均围绕这一观点展开,每段的第一都是主题句,结论句与第一句呼应,这种首尾呼应的写作技巧很值得学习。

applaudv.赞同

cannotbeappliedtoall并不适用于所有人

hardshipn.困难

manualworker体力劳动者

stoutandenergetic健壮而精力充沛

earntheirliving谋生

occupationn.职业

theenergytheyhaveexerted所出的力

absorbv.吸收

tacklev.解决,处理

clingclosetotheirdoctors总离不开医生

slackensthereadinessofgrowthoftheantibodies放松体内增长抗体的准备