2018年12月英语六级作文预测及满分作文：助学贷款的优势思维导图
2018年12月英语六级作文预测及满分作文：助学贷款的优势
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AdvantagesofGettingaLoanfromtheBankforMyStudies
助学贷款的优势
Iamacollegestudentfromafarmer'sfamilyinamountaineousarea.Ayearago,Iwasadmittedtoafamousuniversity.Beforeenteringtheuniversity,Iwastoldthatthenecessaryexpensesduringmyfouryears'studywouldcostnearlyfiftythousandyuan.Myparentshadcollectedallthemoneytherewastocollect,includingthemoneyborrowedfromtheirrelatives,butitwashardlyenoughtomeettheneeds.Then,goodnewscamethatIcouldresorttothebankforaloan.IthoughtitwasagoodideaandsoIdidit.
Mydecisionwasbasedonthefollowingconsiderations:First,withtheloanIcanpaythetuitionandsupportmylifeonthecampus.
Secondly,Idon'thavetodependonmyparentswhoarealwaysworryingabouttheenormousfamilyexpenditure.
Thirdly,Iwillalwayshavethepressureuponmewhichforcesmetostudythehardway.
Fourthly,Ihavetoliveaverysimplelifeandsaveeverycoinpossible.Tosoonerliquidatethedebt,Isometimesworkasahometutor,sometimesadoor-to-doorsalesman,sometimesarestaurantwaiter.
Fifthly,whiledoingpart-timejobs,Ihaveaccumulatedalotofsocialexperience,bittersometimes,sweetoccasionally,buthappyallthetime.
Ithinktheabovearetheadvantagestheloanfromthebankhasbroughttome.Theyarebeneficialnotonlytomystudiesattheuniversitybutalsotomyfuturecareer,becauseIfirmlybelieveinthesaying"Harshlifeproducesadiligentandintelligentman."
CET6六级作文结构分析：
·上大学需要费用
*家庭困难
*助学贷款好消息
·优点
*付学费和生活费
*不依赖父母
*有压力感
*生活俭朴,勤工俭学
*品尝社会百味
·结论
*艰苦的生活能培养出勤奋而有智慧的人
CET6六级作文内容分析：
本文是一篇记叙文。作者以第一人称来写,首先记叙希望助学贷款之由来,主体部分列出了助学贷款之五大优点。最后一句引言“艰苦的生活能培养出勤奋而有智慧的人”结束全文。这类题目的写作必须整理出几条轻重相当的优点,每条优点的表达意义要完整,可用一句、两句或多句来写。本文较适合六级水平。
CET6六级作文万能句型：
loann.贷款
mountaineousarea山区
beadmittedto被录取入
expensen.费用
collectallthemoneytherewastocollect收集所有能收集到的钱
resortto求助于
tuitionn.学费
familyexpenditure家庭开支
studythehardway努力学习
liquidatethedebt偿清欠债
hometutor家教
door-to-doorsalesman上门推销员
accumulatev.积累
socialexperience社会经验
bittersometimes,sweetoccasionally,buthappyallthe
time时苦时甜,但总是很快乐
beneficiala.有利的
Harshlifeproducesadiligentandintelligentman.艰苦的生活能培养出勤奋而有智慧的人
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