2018年12月英语六级作文精讲：在考场思维导图

WhenIwaswalkingalongthepassage,Isawmanystudentswaitingoutsidetheexaminationhall.Igotthedoorsopen,andtheyenteredthehallonebyone.Iknewthattheywereexcitedfromtheirwhisperingmouths.Obviously,theyweretryingtorecallwhattheyhadmemorized.

Theexaminationhallwascleanandorderly.Allthedesksandchairswerearrangedsixbyseveninstraightlines.Theatmosphereshowedthatanimportanteventwouldsoonhappen,anditseemedthatthestudents'futurewouldbedecidedatthisverymoment.

TherewasLi,sittinginthemiddleofthethirdrow,adiligentboywhowouldliketoaskquestions.Henowlookedtiredandnervous,andhiseyesweresurroundedbytwobigblackcircles.Icouldmakeoutthathemusthavespentthewholenightpreparinghimselffortoday’sexamination.Inaninstant,thebellbrokethesilence.Libecameextremelyexcited,hislipsandhandstremblinghysterically,hisfeetmovinginvoluntarily.

Theexaminationpapersweredistributedtothestudents.Theyquicklyglancedatthequestionsandstartedworkingimmediately.Someheavedaheavysighofrelief,someworeasmileontheirlips,whilesomeothersscratchedtheirheadssavagely.AsmileflickeredthroughLi'sface,buthelostnotimetostartworking.

Soon,thehallwasdrownedinthenoiseofscratchingpaperandregularbreathing.

Thebellrangagainandallpaperswerehandedin.Allthestudentsstreamedoutofthehall,busilyexchangingtheiropinionsandresults.AmongthemwasLi,who,thoughwearingasomewhattriumphantsmile,lookedextremelyexhaustedasifhehadgonethroughabattle.

Paragraphs1,2———考前实况描写

Paragraphs3,4———个别学生实况描写

Paragraphs5,6———考场上学生表现描写

Paragraph7———考试后群体和个别学生表现描写

这是一篇描写文,作者以第一人称来写。文中作者从教师的角度描述了群体和个别的学生在考场内外的表现以及他们的心理活动。学生们都经过了大小百余场考试,因此学习本文时一定会产生共鸣。

passagen.走廓

whisperingmouths喃喃低语

orderlya.整齐的

sixbyseveninstraightlines排成7排,每排6座

thisverymoment就在此一刻,这里very是形容词,用以加强语势

eyesweresurroundedbytwobigblackcircles有两个黑眼圈

makeout=understand理解

inaninstant不一会儿

tremblinghysterically神经质地颤抖

involuntarilyad.不自觉地,无可奈何地

bedistributedto分发

heavedaheavysighofrelief长舒一口气

woreasmileontheirlips嘴角浮现微笑

scratchedtheirheadssavagely使劲搔首

flickerv.闪现

losenotimeto+v.抓紧时间去……

wasdrownedinthenoiseofscratchingpaperandregularbreathing(考场上)只听见一片纸笔摩擦声和均匀的呼吸声

streamedoutofthehall鱼贯而出离开考场

triumphanta.得意的