2018年12月英语六级作文精讲：是否该始终服从长辈思维导图

Shouldyoungpeoplealwaysrespectandobeythoseolderthanthemselvesinallcircumstances?Inmyopinion,respectandobediencedonotnecessarilygohandinhandallthetime.

Inmycontext,peoplewhoareolderthanmeshouldbemyparents,oldersiblings,teachers,relativesandothers,whostartedlifeearlierthanIandhaveseenthecomingandgoingofgenerationsandarethereforemuchmoreexperienced.Inviewoftheirseniorityinageandrichexperiences,theydodeserveourrespect.

Respondingourseniorsisthebasicexpressionofpoliteness,suchasgreetingthem,helpingthemdoanythingwithinourcapacityandseekingadvicefromtheminmakingdecisionsinlife.Suchresponsefromusisanexpressionoflove,too.Theseniors,beingassuredofoursincerity,willbemosthappyandcontented.

However,whetheryoungpeopleshouldalwaysobeytheseniorsremainscontroversial.Beforeresponding,Ithinkitishelpfultoask:istheadviceordesiregivenmorallyright?Isitencouragingmetoactagainstmyownwill?Isitgivenbasedonprejudices?Iamconvincedthatyoungpeopleshouldnotsimplyobeywithoutthinking,becauseblindobedienceonlyconfirmshowimmature,impulsiveandnaiveweare.

Toconclude,itisnecessarytorespecttheseniors.However,toobeythematalltimesisquestionable.Asgoesthesaying"thinkbeforeyouact,"Iamsurethateverymatureyouthwilldiscernwhatisrightandwhatiswrongbeforerespondingwisely.

·paragraphl—introduction

*myanswertothequestion

·paragraphs2,3—myarguel

*respect—yes

·paragraph4—myargue2

*obey—questionable

·paragraph5—conclusion

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obedience

本文是一篇典型的议论文,题目是一个社会热门话题。文中作者的论点是“尊敬长者理所应当”而“总要服从则另当别论”。全文的说服力很强,行文流畅,是一篇很好的范文。

obediencen.服从，驯服

gohandinhand联合，并进

inmycontext就我而言

comingandgoingofgenerations几代人的变化

inviewoftheirseniority鉴于他们年长

deservev.应得,应受

sincerityn.衷心,真心诚意

actagainstmyownwill违背自己的意愿行动

prejudicen.偏见

confirmv.证实

immaturea.不成熟

impulsivea.冲动

naivea.天真

discernv.识别,辨别