2018年12月英语六级作文精讲：谈谈你对溺爱的看法思维导图

Today,fewpeoplewoulddefendthetraditionalattitudetochildren.Ifyourecallwhathappenedinolddays,youwouldbeastonishedatthesevereandstricteducationforchildren,forinstance,old-fashionedspankingwascommonpunishmentforchildren.Asaresult,whiletheparentsthusestablishedtheirownauthority,thepoorchildrenwouldneverrecoverfromthedreadfultraumaticexperiencewhentheygrewup.

However,asyouknow,thingsoftengotoextremes.Nowadays,parents'confidenceintheirownauthorityhasbeengreatlyundermined.Countlessarticlesinmagazinesandnewspapersandtvprogrammespublicizechildcare.Whensomuchover-enthusiasticadviceflyingabout,mumanddadjustdon'tknowwhattodoanymore.Intheend,theydonothing.

Sofromearlychildhood,thekidsareinchargeandparents'livesareregulatedaccordingtotheneedsoftheiroffspring.Whenthelittledearsdevelopintoteenagers,theytakecompletecontrol.Iftheyoungpeoplearegoingtohaveaparty,forexample,parentsareaskedtoleavethehouse.Theirpresencemerelyspoilsthefun.Whatelsecanthepoorparentsdobutobey?

Inmymind,achildcertainlyneedslove,andalotofit.Buttheexcessivepermissivenessofmodernparentsissurelydoingmoreharmthangood.Thespreadofjuveniledelinquencyislargelyduetoparentallaxity.Mother,believingthatherlittlebabycanlookafterhimself,isnotathomewhenhereturnsfromschool,solittlebabyroamsthestreet.Thedividing-linebetweenpermissivenessandsheernegligenceisveryfineindeed.

·severeandstricteducationforchildren

*spanking

*children'sdreadfulexperience

·thingsoftengotoextremes

*parents'authorityundermined

*over-enthusiasticchildcare

*parents'liferegulatedaccordingtochildren'sneeds

·comments

*excessivepermissivenessandsheernegligence—afinedividingline

本文是一篇议论文。显然作者的观点是认同这一命题中的说法的。文章以对比的手法将早先对待小孩的传统教育方式作为铺衬，然后以一句“however,thingsoftengotoextremes.”为转折，将话题导入主题“nowadaysparentsaretoopermissivewiththeirchildren.”例证真实而生动，有较强的说服力。最后一段是作者的观点和评论。本文逻辑性强，层次分明，读来统一而连贯。

permissive(ness)a.(n.)随意(的)，放纵(的)

beastonishedat对……感到吃惊

spank(ing)v.(n.)打屁股

traumatica.受到创伤的

thingsoftengotoextremes.事情往往会走向极端

underminev.瓦解

regulatev.调节

offspringn.儿女

dearn.亲爱的人

obeyv.服从

juveniledelinquency青少年犯罪

parentallaxity父母的疏忽

roamv.游荡

dividing-line分界线

sheernegligence完全忽视