英语六级作文范文：图画类作文思维导图

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteanessaybasedonthepicturebelow.Youshouldstartyouressaywithabriefdescriptionofthepictureandthengiveyourcomments.WriteyouressayonAnswerSheet1.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsbutnomorethan200words.

【审题构思】

这是一篇图画类作文，要求考生描述图画，并做出评论。此类作文一般为三段式。即第一段简单描述图画的内容及内涵，第二段就图画的内容展开评论，并表明自己的观点，第三段重申自己的看法并提出建议。考生在评论和表明自己的观点时，一定要思路清晰，且要表达清楚。

【参考范文】

Inthepictureabove,achildfliesfromonecagetotheothercagelikeabird.Onecageisnamedschool,andtheotherisnamedcramschool.Whatasarcasticpicture.Thereisnofreedomleftforthechildrenwhocannotenjoythesupposedcheerfulvacation.

WhycannotthechildrenenjoythevacationthatbelongstothemWhopushthechildrenfromonecagetotheotherWhatshouldwedotohelpthetrappedchildrenThethreequestionssolved,theabovepicturewillnotexistanymore.Theanswertothefirstquestionishiddenwiththesuperficialonebeingacquiringmoreknowledge,andthefundamentaloneisthatparentsdemandmorescoresfromtheirchildren.Theyexpecttheirchildrentobeabletoscoremorethroughattendingvariouscramschoolsatthecostoftheirchildren’ssupposedlysplendidvocation.Soitistheparentswhopursuequicksuccessthatpushthechildrenfromonecagetotheother.Tofreethechildren,theparentsshouldputemphasisonthechildren’sphysicalandmentalhealthratherthanthescore.

AsisknowntoallthatpursuitofhighscoreshaslongbeenaphenomenoninChina,thecauseofthisphenomenonishardtobeuprooted.Therefore,weshouldemancipatethechildreninthemindandreturnthejoyofchildhoodtochildrengradually.