雅思老师都会中招的写作考题-怎么破思维导图

Inmostcountries,prisonisthemostcommonsolutionfortheproblemofcrime.However,themoreeffectivesolutionistoprovidepeoplewithbettereducationsothattheydonotbecomecriminals.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?

犯罪类的话题，这个题目看似限定在关监狱的优缺点，但实际上还有一面是对比education。

犯罪类的题目我们很容易想到：监狱的建造和维护成本高；罪犯在监狱里能够更好的得到教育；提高就业解决社会矛盾可以减少人们的犯罪动机。

但是和本题对比，明显的有偏差，为什么我们会跑偏呢？首先，我们看到crime 本能想到的就是犯罪，这只切合了题目的大话题，其次，通过分析不难发现，themoreeffectivesolutionistoprovidepeoplewithbettereducationsothattheydonotbecomecriminals.旨在介绍通过教育减少犯罪的问题，很多考生会忽略。

那么应该如何避免离题的问题呢？

还是两点，首先确保论点包含了题目全部的关键词，然后就是在段末加上一句话强调题目

针对本题，不少考生会站在"在监狱中再教育会更好"，针对这个论点，我们可以改为 在监狱中，知识最原始的惩罚，通常很难真正改变一个人，二次犯罪都很高，并且罪犯们关在一起，反而可能增加他们的接触，加深他们的邪念，相比于于此，事前教育，可以让他们彻底认清犯罪的后果，明辨是非，彻底根治。

It would be more beneficial if prisoners receive education in jails. This method effectively kills the boring and repetitive jail time, and by acquiring some skills in prison, the criminals are more likely to find a decent job after release. Potentially, the recidivism rate would be controlled.

It is thelegal educationbefore any unlawful actions that can fundamentally tackle crime. This is becauseincarcerationcannot rehabilitate the lawbreaker effectively in many countries, as evidenced by the high recidivism rate globally. Besides, locking up all social evils in the same place facilitates communication among them, contributing to the reinforcement of their antisocial instincts.In comparison, if they are fully aware of the consequence of their behaviors and have a clear and correct understanding of what actions are socially and legally acceptable, they would be much less likely to go astray.

针对这些常见的看似易得分，实际有很多潜在的坑的题目，考生在下笔前一定要小心小心再小心。

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