6月24日四级考前最后重点点睛（作文部分）思维导图

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DearSir/Madame,

IamasophomoreinBeijingUniversity,majoringincomputerscience.Iamwritingtoapplyforafinancialaidformystudyincollege.

Iwouldliketoexplainmoreaboutmysituationhere.SinceIregisteredhere,theexpensesdosehavebeenexertinganegagtiveimpactonmystudy.Mymotherhassuddenlyfallenillandisexpectingamajoroperation.ItisbeyondmyparentsabilitytofinancemethroughmyremainingeducationandtheincomeImakefrommypart-timejobsisfarfromsufficienttofinancemyowntuitionfees.Hence,itisessentialformetogetaloanofnolessthan10,000yuan.Ifmyapplicationisapproved,allthemoneywillgotomytuitionandfeesforthecomingacademicyear.

Fromthepart-timejobopportunitiesofferedbyprogramsinmyschool,Iwillbeabletoearnmorethanenoughtocovermydailyexpenses.Ihaveaverygoodcreditrecord.Inaddition,lenovo,acomputercompany,hasshowngreatinterestsinasoftwarethatIdesingedandpromisedmea5000YuanmothlysalarytostartwithifIdecidetopursuemycareerthereaftergraduation.So,Icandefinitelyguaranteearepaymentofmyloaninthecomingthreeyears.

Iwouldbegreatlyobligedifmyapplicationisgranted.Manythanks.

Yourssincerely,

LiMing

DearSir，

Uponmygraduationfromcollegethisfall,Iamdesirousofsecuringapositionthatwilloffermeanopportunityinthefieldofimportandexporttrading．Knowingsomethingofthescopeandenterpriseofyourhugeexportdepartment，Ithoughtperhapsyouwouldkeepmeinmindforapossibleopening．

Iamstrongandalert,andshallbetwentyyearsofageinJulynextyear.AtpresentIamastudentatRenminUniversitybutIshallgraduatefromcollegethiscomingJuly,finishingtherequirementsinfouryears.ThoughIhavehadnobusinessexperience,IfeelconfidentthatIcancontributetoyourcompanywiththeprofessionalskillsIobtainedincollege,includingahighcommandofEnglish.

IamenclosingmyresumeandletterofrecommendationfromthepresidentoftheUniversity,Ishallbeobligedifyouwillgivemeapersonalinterviewatyourconvenience.

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetitleImmoralBehaviorinPublicaccordingtothefollowingOUTLINEgiveninChinese.Yourcompositionshouldbenofewerthan120words.

ImmoralBehaviorinPublic

Towitnessimmoralbehaviorinpublic,oneneedonlyvisittheBeijingsubway.IstillrememberthefirsttimeItooktheBeijingsubway.Itwasanearlymorning.Iwasinahurrytogotoschool.WhenIwastryingtogetaticket,Ifoundalotofpeoplewaitinginfrontofme,butnobodywasintheline.Tomakeitevenworse,whenIfinallyapproachedtheticketwindow,someonesqueezedintothelinerightinfrontofmeandsteppedonmytoes,pretendingthatshedidn’thearmewhenIscreamed.ItwassuchahorribleexperiencethatIdon’tfeelcomfortabletotakethesubwayanymore.

Immoralbehaviorsinpublicexertaseriesofproblems.Oneofthemostseriousonesisthatitmayexertanegativeimpactonoursenseofsocialresponsibility.Wewillkeepignoringotherpeople’srightsandfeelings,andinturn,wetoowillbedisrespectedsomeday.

Theimprovementofthisphenomenoniscertainlynoteasy.Withaneyeonpracticalimplementationandcosteffectiveness,Iproposethatsocietymakeitclearineverywaythatpeoplewhofailtorespectthecommongoodwillbeseriouslypunished.Stricterpoliciesforthisshouldbemadetocorrectthisphenomenonassoonaspossible.

近几年来，中国大城市特别是北京的汽车污染问题越来越严重，有人提出每月少开一天车的建议，你如何看待。

Havingover2,600,000motorvehicles,Beijingisworthyofthename,thecityonfourwheels.However,wearealsopayingadirectpricefortherisingnumberofcarsaswehavemoretrafficaccidents,wehavetosuffermoretrafficjamsandwebreathedirtierair.

Toimprovethissituation,peoplehavecomeupwithvarioussuggestions.ManyBeijing'senvironmentalistsarecallingoncarownerstostoptheirenginesforonedayeachmonth.Somegovernmentofficialsalsosuggesttomakethepricesofgasolineevenhighertomotivatecardriverstotakepublictransportationtosavemoney.

ThoughIamacarlover,Ican’tnotignorethefactthatcarspollutetheenvironmentandstronglysupportdrivingless.Ifeverycarownerdrivesonedaylessamonth,itwouldhelptoreduceexhaustfumesandwewillbeabletoenjoymoreblueskydays.Sometimesthesmallestchangescanmakeabigdifference.

E:学生会公告

Thistimeofyearmoststudentsarefocusedonmeetingnewfriends,joiningnewactivitiesandupcomingclasses.Thoughtsofthepasteasilydriftawaywhilefutureexploitsreceivethemostattention.Butasyoubusyyourselfwiththenewsemester,pauseamomenttorememberthefamouswriter,LuXun,whowouldhavecelebratedhis124thbirthdaytoday.

Incommemorationofthisgreatman’slife,theBookClubhasorganizedaguestspeakerfromPekingUniversitytocomespeaktostudentsaboutsomeofLuXun’sunpublishedmemoirs.ThelecturewillbeinClassroom204inthemainbuilding,startingat7:00pm.

SuchanacademiclecturemightnotseemlikethemostappealingwaytospendaFridayevening,butitpromisestobeaneveningthatwillbothentertainandinformeventhemostseasonedstudentsofChinesehistory.