2014年12月四级全国统一模拟冲刺试卷写作解析思维导图

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteanessay.Youshouldstartyouressaywithabriefdescriptionofthepictureandthenexpressyourviewsontheproperwayofusingsocialmedia.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.WriteyouressayonAnswerSheet1.

Sir,waitasecond.I’llcheckitwiththemathapponmymobilephone.ThenI’llgiveyoutheresult.”

范文及写作思路简析

首段：图画描述

首句引入图画;之后描述图画内容：人/物+动作+文字+环境

Thisisafunnybutenlighteningcartoon:ateachergiveshisstudentatestofbasicskillsinmath;tohissurprise,thegirlresponds/answers,“Sir,waitasecond.I’llcheckitwiththemathapponmymobilephone.ThenI’llgiveyoutheresult.”

二段：图画主题+现象+危害

Apparently,thispicturecanbenaturallyassociatedwiththeover-dependenceonsocialmedia:ifstudentsintendtoacquireadequateskillsinstudy,itisnotadvisableforthemtocompletelydependonelectronictools.Incontemporarysociety,ithasbecomeatrendforahostofyoungsterstousevariousmediainstudy.Meanwhile,anincreasingnumberofteenagersfinditratherconvenientandefficienttosolveproblemswiththehelpofthesetools.Takingalookaround,wecannoticeagreatmanystudentslikethegirlinthecartoon.However,itisthesesocialmediathatdonotenablestudentstobuildupenoughability,experienceandskillstodealwithproblemsindependently.(举例2：Acaseinpointisthestudentinthepicture.)Asamatteroffact,intelligentpeopleinlargenumbershavecometorealizethenegativeimpactsofelectronicequipmentonstudents’learning.

尾段：观点+建议

Asacollegestudent,Iamconvincedthatitisofgreatnecessityforyoungsterstoenhanceourability/qualitytosolveproblemsindependently.Thus,teachersshouldeducate,advocateandencouragetheirkidstocultivatethisawareness.Dobearinmind:socialmediaarejustourtools.(245words)

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