2022年大学英语六级满分作文赏析：你认为长假好还是不好思维导图

Week-longHolidays,GoodorBad?What'sYourOpinion?你认为长假好还是不好?

OurNationalDayiscoming.Weshallhavedaysofrest,presumablyweeklongholidaysagainjustliketheweeklongMayDayholidays.Manypeoplewelcomeweeklongholidaysandarebusyplanningwhereandhowtospendthesevendays;whereasmanyotherpeopledonotapplaud.Astome,weeklongholidaysmeanaspanofdullness,boredom,melancholyandhelplessness,andIthinkanyonewhohadexperiencedtheholidaysufferingsinMaywouldsharemyfeelings.

IwellrememberthatfromMayDay,tobemoreexact,afewdaysearlierthanMayDay,theshoppingseasonstarted.Mostshopsextendedtheirshoppinghourstorespondtotheiroverwhelminglyenthusiasticcustomers.Therewerespecialsaleswithdiscountcouponsandinstantluckydrawsandvarioussalespromotionsinnearlyeverybigstoretolurepotentialcustomersintospendingmore.Crowdsofshoppersflockedtowardsdepartmentstores,enjoyingtheirhighpurchasingpower.

Thereweretrafficjamsalmosteverywhere,peoplewaitedinlongqueuesatbus-stopsandtaxi-stands,lookingentirelyexhausted.Tempersflaredwhenpeoplegotpushedorifsomeoneelsecutthequeue.Impatientdrivershonkedateachothereverynowandthen.

Therailwaystationwascongestedwithtravelerswhorushedtotheplatformlikeaswarmofbeesandthensqueezedtheirwayintothetrainforseatsasiftherewouldbenotomorrow.

Intherestaurants,tableswereshared.Aplatoonofwaitersfiledoutfromthekitchenarmedwithvariouscontainersofeatables.Ordersweretakenfeverishlyandthenshoutedacrosstothekitchen.Excitementreignedeverywhereaswaitersranhitherandthithertofilltheorders.

Theabovearejustsomevividscenesthathappenedafewmonthsago.Everywherewaschaosandchaoseverywhere.Iamreallyafraidthedramawillsoonberepeated.

True,weeklongholidayshelpactivateeconomy,butwhataboutafter-holidaydepression?Nodoubt,peoplecanhavealotofleisure,butleisuredoesnotalwaysbringalotofpleasure.

·Generalcomment—theme+attitude(1)+attitude

(2)+myattitude(Ihateweeklongholidays.)

·Development—beforeholidays

duringholidays

afterholidays

本文是一篇议论文。作者首先在第一段中摆出了对长假的两种不同的看法以及作者自己的态度。第二部分包括四小段,每段均以作者亲身经历以及耳闻目睹的事实论证作者在第一段中的观点,例证真实而生动。末二段为以上各段的小结,最后一段是结论,再次论证作者的观点,十分有力。

busy+-ing.忙于

meloncholyn.寂寞

dullnessn.枯燥

shareone'sfeelings有同感

specialsales甩卖

discountcoupons打折卷

instantluckydraws即时幸运抽奖

taxi-standn.出租车停靠站

cutthequeue插队

honkv.按喇叭

shareatable同桌(就餐)

chaosn.混乱

activateeconomy激活经济

depressionn.萧条