2022年大学英语六级满分作文赏析：种种承诺思维导图

WhenIfirstlookatthecartoon,Ican'thelplaughingatthehenwhoseemstobeseriouslymakingafoolishannouncementtothepublicthatshealwayslayseggs,smoothandroundandneverwithouteggwhiteandyolkinsidetheshell.However,whenIstarttostudythecartoonmorecarefully,IfindsomethingsignificantinitandgraduallyIcometounderstandtheauthor'sintention.

Nowadays,almostalltradesandprofessionsarerepeatedlymakingsincerepromisestopeople:governmentpeopleassurethattheyarenobleandcleanandwillservepeopleheartandsoulmerchantssmilinglyswearthattheproductstheysellareofsuperiorquality,genuineinsteadoffalse,life-timemaintenanceguaranteedandthecheapestmarketprice;advertiserstakepainstorecommendmiracledrugsandmake-youbeautifulcosmetics,etc.Yearafteryear,suchpromisesarerepeated.Iwonderwhytheytakesomuchtroubletoboastoudlyabouttheirobligationsandduties.Peoplebelievedthematfirst,butgraduallybecameawakenedbecausetheyhavefoundsomedishonestyinsuchbombingpromises.

"Actionsspeaklouderthanwords."Thehenisfoolishenoughtomakeheregg-promise,whyshouldn'tthosenonsense-makersbecomecleverer?

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*Interpretationofthecartoon

*Myunderstanding

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*Promisesmadebyalltradesandprofessions

*Awakeningofthepeople

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*"Actionsspeaklouderthanwords."

本文是一篇漫画作文,画的寓意是“各行各业的种种承诺本应是自身的职责,却要大肆渲染,无疑是多此一举”,其愚蠢程度不亚于图中“母鸡下蛋的承诺”。这类题型必须把握其寓意(hiddenmeaning),方能切中主题。本文第一段用两句解释了漫画,其开头不落俗套,文笔幽默。第二段切入主题,例举各种“多此一举”的承诺,笔调生动,最后一句是有力的揭露。结尾段中引用了一句成语并奉劝承诺者不要像母鸡那样愚蠢本题曾是一次考研写作题,漫画取自于21世纪报,作者借题自行撰文。

cartoonn.漫画

can'thelp+-ing禁不住

layeggs下蛋

eggwhiten.蛋白

yolkn.蛋黄

alltradesandprofessions各行各业

servepeopleheartandsoul全心全意为人民服务

swearv.发誓

superiorquality优质

genuineinsteadoffalse真货而不是假货

life-timemaintenanceguaranteed保证终身维修

takepainsto+v.费尽心思去

miracledrugs神药

make-you-beautifulcosmetics“使你美”化妆品

yearafteryear年复一年

boastabout吹嘘

obligationn.责职,义务

dishonestyinsuchbombingpromises轰炸性的承诺中的欺骗

nonsense-makers说废话者