2017年12月英语六级写作范文：推迟退休思维导图

1.近年来，推迟退休年龄引发人们热议

2.推迟退休年龄有利也有弊

3.我的看法

BasedonarecentsurveyontheInternet,amajorityofindividualsadmitthatagingsocietywillbringavarietyofproblemstotheirlife.Alongwiththetrendoflongevity,ithasbecomeatrendforpeopletodebatewhetheritiswisetopostponeretirementage.

Somepeoplefavorpostponingtheretirementage.Intheireyes,itisthispolicythatenablestheagingsocietytobuildupenoughwork-force.Asamatteroffact,peopleinmountingnumbershavecometorealizethisprobleminanagingsociety.Evenso,othersholdadifferentviewthatpostponingretirementagecarriessomerisks.Thispolicycanbringoldpeoplestress,butcannotarousetheirenthusiasmforwork,andcannothelpthemtoenjoytheirretirementpension.

Iamconvincedthatweshouldbalanceoldpeople’interestandthisagingsociety.Thus,ifthoseseniorshaveenthusiasmforwork,weshouldeducate,advocateandencouragethemtoworkandperformtheirtasks.Ifwetryourutmosttodoso,thefutureofoldpeople’lifewillbepromising,hopefulandrosy.

（编辑：赵宁）