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2012年12月大学英语四级写作方法：语态的隐含意义 关于"but"的用法 中国人喜欢使用"but"从句：同中文一样，在英文中这也是连接两个短句的简单方法。
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2012年12月大学英语四级写作方法：切忌过于依赖从句思维导图模板大纲
2012年12月大学英语四级写作方法：语态的隐含意义
关于"but"的用法
中国人喜欢使用"but"从句：同中文一样，在英文中这也是连接两个短句的简单方法。要避免单一的"but"从句，可以考虑采用以下这些变化形式：
Plain:Thechildrenatschoolwerefamiliarwithmanygames,butLiHuahadneverevenheardofthem.
Interesting:ThechildrenatschoolwerefamiliarwithgamesLiHuahadneverevenheardof.
Plain:Theroomwassilent,butsuddenlytherewasaclapofthunderoutside.
Interesting:Thesilenceoftheroomwasbrokenbyasuddenclapofthunderoutside.
Plain:Theywerepassionateloversnotonlyonstagebutalsooffstage.
Better:Theywerepassionateloversonstageandoff.
Plain:Outsidethecinema,shelitacigarette,notnecessarilybecauseshehadadesiretosmoke,butbecauseshefelttheneedforwarmth.
Better:Outsidethecinema,shelitacigarette,asmuchfromtheneedforwarmthasfromanydesiretosmoke.
Plain:Itwasmeanttobeabriefkiss,butitturnedintoalong,lingeringone.
Interesting:Whatwasmeanttobeabriefkissturnedintoalong,lingeringone.
Plain:Musiclightenslife,butliteraturedeepensit.
Interesting:Musiclightenslife;literaturedeepensit.
Plain:Thefilm"ChariotsofFire"isaboutsomeyoungrunners,butitismorethanjustthat.
Interesting:Thefilm"ChariotsofFire"ismuchmorethanjustastoryofyoungrunners.
Plain:Itisnothisheightbuthisweightthatpreventedhimfromcompetingintherace.
Interesting:Hisweight,nothisheight,preventedhimfromcompetingintherace.
Plain:Susanseemedunsuitableforthepart,butsheturnedouttobethebestactressintheproduction.
Interesting:Susanseemedunsuitableforthepart,yetsheturnedouttobethebestactressintheproduction.
Plain:OldWangisoftendescribedasahappy-go-luckyperson,butthelasthalfhourofthehikehomehewasinterestedinnothingbutabathandabed.
Interesting:OldWang,anotherwisehappy-go-luckyperson,thoughtofonlytwothingsthelasthalfhourofthehikehome:abathandabed.
关于"if...then"和"if"从句
除了"but"从句，很多学英语的人还会过多使用"if…then"或是"if"从句。这些从句本身并不是不好。但我们这里讨论的是多样性及其必要性。看看下例：
Before:Ifyoufailtopassthedrugtest,wewillhavetodismissyoufromyourjob.
After:Failuretopassthedrugtestwillresultinjobdismissal.
修改后的句子语气显得稍强一些。同时因为句中省掉了"you"，使句子在语气上减少了对抗性。这个解题对策适用于每种人称，不单单指"you"。
Plain:Ifoneimitates,onecannotexpecttobegreat.
Interesting:Nopersoneveryetbecamegreatbyimitation.
Plain:Ifwewanttoendawarquickly,wemustloseit.
Interesting:Thequickestwaytoendawaristoloseit.
Plain:Ifweweredirectedfromgovernmentbureaucracywhentosow,andwhentoreap,weshouldsoonwantbread.
Interesting:Werewedirectedfromgovernmentbureaucracywhentosow,andwhentoreap,weshouldsoonwantbread.
Plain:Severalstaffmembershavecheckedthemanuscripttoseeifitisaccurateandeasytouse.
Interesting:Severalstaffmembershavecheckedthemanuscriptforaccuracyandeaseofuse.
Plain:Ifwordsaretakenoutofcontext,theyarenotverylikelytomeanthesameastheydowhentheyareincontext.
Interesting:Wordstakenoutofcontextdonotalwaysmeanwhattheydoincontext.
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