2016年12月英语六级作文考前提分练习题(4)思维导图

Iamacollegestudentfromafarmer'sfamilyinamountaineousarea.Ayearago,Iwasadmittedtoafamousuniversity.Beforeenteringtheuniversity,Iwastoldthatthenecessaryexpensesduringmyfouryears'studywouldcostnearlyfiftythousandyuan.Myparentshadcollectedallthemoneytherewastocollect,includingthemoneyborrowedfromtheirrelatives,butitwashardlyenoughtomeettheneeds.Then,goodnewscamethatIcouldresorttothebankforaloan.IthoughtitwasagoodideaandsoIdidit.

Mydecisionwasbasedonthefollowingconsiderations:First,withtheloanIcanpaythetuitionandsupportmylifeonthecampus.

Secondly,Idon'thavetodependonmyparentswhoarealwaysworryingabouttheenormousfamilyexpenditure.

Thirdly,Iwillalwayshavethepressureuponmewhichforcesmetostudythehardway.

Fourthly,Ihavetoliveaverysimplelifeandsaveeverycoinpossible.Tosoonerliquidatethedebt,Isometimesworkasahometutor,sometimesadoor-to-doorsalesman,sometimesarestaurantwaiter.

Fifthly,whiledoingpart-timejobs,Ihaveaccumulatedalotofsocialexperience,bittersometimes,sweetoccasionally,buthappyallthetime.

Ithinktheabovearetheadvantagestheloanfromthebankhasbroughttome.Theyarebeneficialnotonlytomystudiesattheuniversitybutalsotomyfuturecareer,becauseIfirmlybelieveinthesaying"Harshlifeproducesadiligentandintelligentman."

·上大学需要费用

*家庭困难

*助学贷款好消息

·优点

*付学费和生活费

*不依赖父母

*有压力感

*生活俭朴,勤工俭学

*品尝社会百味

·结论

*艰苦的生活能培养出勤奋而有智慧的人

本文是一篇记叙文。作者以第一人称来写,首先记叙希望助学贷款之由来,主体部分列出了助学贷款之五大优点。最后一句引言“艰苦的生活能培养出勤奋而有智慧的人”结束全文。这类题目的写作必须整理出几条轻重相当的优点,每条优点的表达意义要完整,可用一句、两句或多句来写。本文较适合六级水平。

loann.贷款

mountaineousarea山区

beadmittedto被录取入

expensen.费用

collectallthemoneytherewastocollect收集所有能收集到的钱

resortto求助于

tuitionn.学费

familyexpenditure家庭开支

studythehardway努力学习

liquidatethedebt偿清欠债

hometutor家教

door-to-doorsalesman上门推销员

accumulatev.积累

socialexperience社会经验

bittersometimes,sweetoccasionally,buthappyallthe

time时苦时甜,但总是很快乐

beneficiala.有利的