2018外研社英语写作大赛范文(5篇)思维导图

2. 部分论证不够充分，例如文章第二段结尾，在科学发展的历程中如何可以证明"共情"的缺席，可以有进一步的展开。

3. 文章引证逻辑实证主义支撑自己的观点，但对逻辑实证主义的解读不完全准确，也是文章的一点瑕疵。

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大家上午好！今天，我们期待已久的全省技工院校教师首届"劳动社杯"教学设计大赛就要拉开帷幕了，作为参赛教师，我们感到既兴奋又紧张。我是xxx学院参赛选手。在此，我代表全体参赛选手，向精心组织筹备这次大赛的组委会、及承办大赛的西安工程技师学院的领导和工作人员表示衷心的感谢！

作为一名教师，我深深感到，要培养出适应社会经济发展所需要的高素质劳动者，不仅要具备高尚的师德、丰富的理论知识和精湛的技能，而且要掌握高超的教育教学能力和不断创新的教学手段和教学方法。教学设计大赛为我们搭建了一个施展教学技能的平台，为我们提供了互相交流，互相学习，共同进步的良机。通过大赛，展示我们教学一线教师的风采、证明自身的价值、审视差距、确立目标和方向、鞭策我们积极进取、不断进步，全面提升技工院校教育教学质量。

请大赛组委会放心，我们全体参赛选手将珍惜这次难得的学习机会，以饱满的热情和认真的态度投入比赛，严格遵守参赛选手守则，服从比赛安排，尊重专家，服从评判，赛出水平，争取取得优异的成绩。

预祝20xx年全省技工院校教师首届"劳动社杯"教学设计大赛圆满成功！谢谢大家！

Bidding the lovely scenes at distance hail!

And see no end to the landscape, new objects presenting themselves as we advance; so, in the commencement of life, we set no bounds to our inclinations. nor to the unrestricted opportunities of gratifying them. we have as yet found no obstacle, no disposition to flag; and it seems that we can go on so forever. we look round in a new world, full of life, and motion, and ceaseleprogress; and feel in ourselves all the vigor and spirit to keep pace with it, and do not foresee from any present symptoms how we shall be left behind in the natural course of things, decline into old age, and drop into the grave. it is the simplicity, and as it were abstractedneof our feelings in youth, that (so to speak) identifies us with nature, and (our experience being slight and our passions strong) deludes us into a belief of being immortal like it. our short-lives connection with existence we fondly flatter ourselves, is an indissoluble and lasting union-a honeymoon that knows neither coldness, jar, nor separation. as infants smile and sleep, we are rocked in the cradle of our wayward fancies, and lulled into security by the roar of the universe around us0we quaff the cup of life with eager haste without draining it, instead of which it only overflows the more-objects prearound us, filling the mind with their magnitude and with the strong of desires that wait upon them, so that we have no room for the thoughts of death.

I believe if we understand and help each other, our school will be a better place.