小学英语作文高级点评范文共6篇思维导图

Today, my mother has something to do, so she leaves the house early in the morning.

Before she goes, I have promised to clean the house, so that she can relieve the burden. But I soon forget my job and just go out to play with my friends. When I go home, I see my mother is cleaning the house, I am so sorry to her.

I decide to keep my promise next time.

今天，我妈妈有事情要做，所以她清晨离开了房子。在她走之前，我已经答应了打扫房子，这样她就可以减轻负担。但我很快就忘记我的工作，和我的朋友出去玩。当我回家时，看到妈妈正在打扫房间，我很抱歉。我决定下次遵守我的诺言。

My hobby is collecting stamps. There are many stamps in my room. I like stamps very much.

There are many things on the stamps. They are colorful and beautiful.

After school I usually go to the post office and there are many people there. I learn a lot from collecting stamps.

I like collecting stamps very much.

In my house, I have my room, my room is my private place, I don’t have to listen to my parents’ babbling.

I like to stay at my room when I finish my dinner, I will stay silent and think about the question without other people’s interfere.

My room can keep me safe and leave me the space to think.

I love my room, I want to decorate it someday, making it more comfortable.

Hi. My name isWang Haiyang!

I have a lot of friends, but I have only a few good friends. One of them is my best friend. We are both twelve years old. He is fat and tall.

He likes to eat oranges and meat. He is very straight and generous. We always help each other. He is a nice boy and his math is very good. He likes to play football and basketball. I enjoy playing with him because I can learn a lot from him. He can always come up with smart answers to those difficult questions. We usually play together after school in the afternoon.

He is very funny and sometimes he tells me some interesting stories but sometimes he sets me up. After all we get a long well. But sometimes we fight each other. His goal is to be a math teacher. He lives in LinShan and I live in Xiangshan. But we are good friends.

i have a friend , calling the computer . i usually get to the internet ,checking the date.

my friend and mother also like to get to the internet . they are similar to me , just is all free up . make the friend .in the sunny, i can see the movie and chat with my friend my friend on line . i can listen to music .

i think computer is useful .