英语商务函电格式范文(必备7篇)思维导图

1. Please inform me that (of)

2. Kindly inform me that (of)

3. Be good enough to inform me that (of)

4. Be so good as to inform me that (of)

5. Have the goodness to inform me that (of)

6. Oblige me by informing that (of)

7. I should be obliged if you would inform me that (of)

8. I should be glad if you would inform me that (of)

9. I should esteem it a favour if you would inform me that (of)

10. I will thank you to inform me that (of)

11. You will greatly oblige me by informing that (of)

12. We shall be obliged if you will inform us that (of)

13. We shall be pleased to have your information regarding (on, as to; about)

14. We shall deem it a favour if you will advise us of

15. We shall esteem it a high favour if you will inform us that (of)

Dear Mr/Ms,

I represent the W/P Electronics Company in Dallas, and will be in Kunming from next Monday to Friday, (October 5-9). I should like to call on you to discuss our new monitor. Would 0930 hours on Tuesday, October 6 be convenient?

I shall be in Beijing, at the Great Wall Hotel, from Tuesday, September 29, until Sunday, October 4, where a message will reach me. If the day is not convenient, will you please suggest another.

Yours faithfully

尊敬的先生/小姐

我是达拉斯W/P电子公司的代表,将于下周一到周五(10月5-9日)住留昆明。我乐于请您商讨我们新的显示器。星期二即10月6日上午09:30是否方便?

从周二,即9月29日,我将住在北京的长城宾馆,直到周六,即10月4日,在那会有通知给我。如商讨日期不方便,请另外建议。

发送商务信函的目的在于建立商务往来关系，就某一细节进行商讨，努力达成共识，以便促进一项商务活动的开展。要达到这些目的，首先必须保证阅读者能够清楚了解写信人的意图，迂回或闪烁其辞的话语会让读信人产生不信任，甚至会怀疑对方的语言表达能力，对进一步开展商务活动很不利。模棱两可的话轻则阻碍读信人对信函意思的理解，重则会对发函方造成不必要的损失。例如: As to the steamers sailing from Hong Kong to San Francisco，we have bimonthly direct services. 此处bimonthly 有歧义，可以是twice a month 或者once two month.故读信人就迷惑了，可以改写为We have two direct sailings every month from Hong Kong to San Francisco.

翻译要保留原文的清晰度相当重要。由于在较为正式的场合中，为了将一概念定义完整和清楚，英文常常用关联词将几个短句并在一起形成一个长句，而中文无法照样只用一句话来翻译，即使这样译了也很难达到通顺和自然。这时，我们就采取将长句按特定的事情发展的顺序拆分成两个或两个以上的小句子的方式来翻译。必要时还要增加或省略一些词语，让整段文字结构更合理、内容更清楚。例如: The prices stated are based on current freight rates，any increase or decrease in freight rates at time of shipment is to be the benefit of the buyer，with the seller assuming the payment of all transportation charges to the point or place of delivery.例句中以一个介词with 来分界，译为"合同价格是以运费计算，装运时运费的增减均属买方。卖方则承担至交货地的全部运费"。在原文中with 分句是一个状语，翻译时采用中国人平铺直叙的思维方式，用分述的方式把这个句子拆成两句，清楚地表达了原文的语言信息。

是不是一封书信只要包含了全部关键信息就可以成为一封好的书信了呢? 拟信人还应注意语言组织的条理性，或按事情发展的先后顺序，或按各要素的重要性排序编写。东扯一句，西扯一句的写法必定会影响文章的清晰度。

商务写作

(Business Writing)

一、商务信函概述

二、应用原则

三、商务信函的构成要素

Dear Sir or Madam:

Thank you for your order No. 6565 dated 1 July for 100widgets.

I regret to say that our records show that we do not have sufficient letter of credit. We can fulfill your order only upon the receipt of a confirmed, irrevocable letter of credit.

We are sorry for the delay and await your instructions.

Yours sincerely,

Hillary

Dear Mr/Mrs,

We have today received with thanks information concerning transactions onthe New York Wheat Exchange which will be made full use of by our researchdepartment.

We look forward to further cooperation with you.

Yours faithfully

尊敬的先生/小姐，

我们今天收到了有关纽约小麦交易所的业务信息，非常感谢，我们的研究部门将充分利用这些信息。

期待与你进一步合作。

你诚挚的

4商务英语信函常用句子

一.特此奉告等

Dear Sir or Madam:

This is in regards to your order for 5,000widgets and our sales confirmation No. 341. We would like to remind you that the delivery date is approaching and we have not yet received the covering letter of credit.

We would be grateful if you would expedite the establishment of the L/C so that we can ship the order on time. In order to avoid any further delay, please make sure that the L/C instructions are in precise accordance with the terms of the contract.

We look forward to receiving your response at an early date.

Yours sincerely,

Hillary