2022年大学英语六级满分作文赏析：危险运动应该被禁止思维导图

DangerousSportsShouldBeBanned危险运动应该被禁止

WhenwespeakoftheancientRomans,wecan'thelpthrillingattheslaughterintheirarenaswhichtheytookasentertainment.Well,anyway,thishappened2,000yearsago.Butaremodernpeoplelessblood-thirsty?Whydoboxingmatchesattractsuchuniversalinterest?Don'tthespectatorshopetoseesomeviolence?

Itisreallyincrediblethatinthisageweshouldstillallowhuntingandbull-fighting,thatweshouldbepreparedtositbackandwatchtwomenfighteachotherinaboxingring,thatweshouldberelativelyunmovedbythesightofoneoranumberofracingcarscrashingandburstingintoflames.Peopletakepartinviolentsportsbecauseofthehighrewardstheybring.Spectatorsarewillingtopayvastsumsofmoneytoseeviolence.Alotofpeoplearedisappointedifafightisoverintworoundsinsteadoffifteenjustbecausetheyhavebeendeprivedoftheexquisitepleasureofwitnessingprolongedtortureandviolence.

Whyshouldwebanviolentsportssincepeopleenjoythemsomuch?Theanswerissimple:theyareuncivilized.Forcenturiesmanhasbeentryingtoimprovehimselfspirituallyandemotionallyandthisisthe21stcentury.Tremendousprogresshasbeenmadeinscienceandtechnology,socialwelfaresystemsareinoperationinmanypartsoftheworld,andbigeffortshavebeenmadetoincreasepublicwealth.Thesechangeshavecomeaboutbecausehumanbeingshavetakenpositivestepstochangeandimprovehumancivilization.Ifwebanneddangerousandviolentsports,wewouldbemovingonestepfurthertoimprovingmankind.

·从古罗马竞技场引起的联想

*现代人是不是lessblood-thirsty

*拳击为什么吸引universalinterest

*观众难道不想看violence

*猎兽,斗牛,拳击,赛车

*运动员为利而搏

*观众花钱取乐

·为什么要禁止危险运动

*文明时代做文明人

*世界在前进

*提高人类的素质

本文为一篇议论文。本文引言部分的重点是三个问题,而前两句只是背景。以问题开头引出话题中心,列举几项危险运动以及运动员和观众的心态。作者在第三段中发表自己的看法为什么应当禁止危险运动。本文是一热门话题,作者所写的每一段都有深意且有联想,这样的思路和布局非比一般。

can'thelpthrilling不禁不寒而栗

slaughtern.屠杀

arenan.竞技场

blood-thirstya.嗜血的

spectatorn.观众,旁观者

violencen.暴力

incrediblea.不可想像的

bull-fightingn.斗牛

boxingring拳击场

unmoveda.无动于衷

racingcarscrashingandburstingintoflames赛车撞毁燃烧起来

bewillingto+v.愿意做……

roundn.回合

bedeprivedof剥夺了