2022年大学英语六级满分作文赏析：玩游戏赢的时候非常高兴思维导图

"PlayingaGameIsFunOnlyWhenYouWin."DoYouAgreeorDisagreewithThisStatement?玩游戏赢的时候非常高兴，你是否同意?

"PlayingaGameIsFunOnlyWhenYouWin."DoYouAgreeorDisagreewithThisStatement?

Somepeoplearguethatathletes,whileplayinggames,shouldadheretotheprinciple"Friendshipfirst,competitionsecond,"andthatisthetruesportsmanship.

Personally,Idisagreewiththispointofview.Thereisnodenyingthatcompetitorsshouldbefriendlywitheachother.However,theprimaryconcernofeveryplayer,afterhardtrainingforayearortwo,istowinthegame.His/Hersolemotivation,eitherduringthetrainingorintherace,ispromptedbyaloominghopeandaprospectivechampionship.Beitachessgameoracompetitionofweight-liftingoraraceofahundred-metredash,thecaseisalwaystrue.Ifhe/shewinsthegame,highrewards,flowersandhonourwillpileuponhim/her.Ifhe/shelosesonceortwice,he/shewillbecomelesscourageousforthethirdtime.However,severallossesmaybeathim/herdown,andhis/hernextbattle,ifhe/sheisdaringtofight,willprobablybeafiasco.

So,inmymind,thefunorhappinessofplayingagameliesintheathlete'sultimateachievementofthegoal.WeallknowNapoleon'sfamoussayingthatasoldierwhodoesnothavetheambitiontobecomeamarshalisnotarealsoldier.Iagreethatanunambitiousathleteisnotarealathlete.

·somepeople'sargue—"Friendshipfirst,competitionsecond"=truesportsmanship

·Myargue

*Primaryconcernofeveryplayer—towinthegame

*Motivatedbychampionship

*Severallosses—fiasco

·Conclusion

*Funorhappinessinultimateachievement

*Unambitiousathlete—notarealathlete

本文是一篇议论文,作者的论点打破了“友谊第一,比赛第二”的常规原则,而认为比赛就是要赢,文中充满了竞争意识,但说理性很强,很难让人不信服。在结尾段中借用了拿破仑的名言“不想当元帅的士兵不是一个真正的士兵”,并依此证明“没有雄心的运动员就不是一个真正的运动员”。此文很值得六级和托福应试者学习。

adhereto=follow

sportsmanshipn.运动员精神

befriendlywith与……友好

primaryconcern主要关切的事

bepromptedbyaloominghopeandaprospectivechampionship受到一种隐约的希望和未来冠军的激励

weight-lifting举重

ahundered-metredash百米赛跑

becomelesscourageous锐气顿减

fiascon.惨败

unambitiousa.无雄心的