2022年大学英语六级满分作文赏析：金钱有多重要?思维导图

HowImportantIsMoney?

Noonewouldargue,Ithink,thatmoneyisunimportant.Therearecertainthingsthathumanbeingsneed—food,shelter,medicalcareandthesethingscostmoney.Butifonehasenoughmoneytoliveon,topayforthebasicessentialsoflife,isitimportanttohavealotmoremoneythanthat?Willyourlifeimproveinproportiontotheamountofmoneythatyouhave?

Well,thereisnodenyingthatmoneycanbuyalot.Maybeyoudonotneedmuchmoneytopayforasimpleshelter,buthowaboutifyouwantanicebigapartmentinaniceneighbourhood,orifyouwanttobuyahouse?Infact,peopledogetoneachother'snervesiftheyarecrowdedtogetherinasmallkitchen,ifamarriedcouplecannotbutsharearoomwiththeirparents,ifchildrenarenotallowedtohavealittleprivacyoftheirown.

Moreover,itisnicetogetalittlepleasureoutoflife,alittlefunfromtimetotime.Unfortunately,manyofthefunthingsthatyoucandotodaycostmoney.Inmoderncities,forexample,onanynight,outstandingperformersappearinnightclubsandonconcertstages.Furthermore,youcandineonfoodsfromeverycorneroftheworldintherestaurants.Sohowcanitbethatmanypeopleinmoderncitiesdonothavefun?Simple,theydonothavethemoneytotakeadvantageofalltheseattractions.

So,ismoneytheroadtohappiness?Notreally.Largenumbersofpeopleworkeveryday,workovertime,workweekends,andmakealotofmoney.Aretheyhappy?No.Theyhavenotimetoformormaintainfriendship,notimetoenjoythemselves.

Surelyeveryonehasthoughtattimes,"IfonlyIhadalotofmoney,Iwouldbethehappiestpersonintheworld."Butitisimportanttorememberthatmoneyisonlyameanstoanend,nottheenditself.

CET6六级作文结构分析：

本文是一篇议论文,全文围绕“Moneyisnoteverything,buteverythingneedsmoney”展开。作者的论点体现在“Moneyisonlyameanstoanend,nottheenditself.”最后一句中。本文篇幅较长，但思路并不复杂，例证均邻近生活实际，因此并不难写。这样的议论文适合于六级和考研水平。

sheltern.住所

medicalcare医疗

essentialsoflife生活必需品

inproportionto成正比

getoneachother'snerves大家都很伤脑筋

privacyn.隐私

performern.演员

takeadvantageofalltheseattractions利用这一切可享受的东西

workovertime加班

ameanstoanend,nottheenditself达到目的手段而本身并不是目的