2016年6月六级作文考前练习(一)：旅游思维导图
2016年6月六级作文考前练习(一)：旅游
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Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay,entitledGoingonaPackageTouroraSelf-tour.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.
1.有些人喜欢跟团旅游
2.有些人喜欢自助旅游
3.你的看法
【范文】：
APackageTouroraSelf-guidedTour?
①Wheneverpeoplegotraveling,theywillfaceadifficultproblemofchoosingbetweengoingonapackagetourandgoingonaself-guidedtour.②Peoplepreferringtogoonapackagetourholdtheopinionthatyoudon'thavetoworryabouttheschedule,transportationandaccommodation,whichmakesitpossibleforthetouriststofullykeeptheirmindsonenjoyingthebeautifulsceneryandbecomingfamiliarwiththelocalcustoms.③Andwhat'smore,itismuchsaferandmoney-savingthanself-guidedtour.④Onthecontrary,peoplewhoareinfavorofaselfguidedtourarguethattheywillfeelquitefreeinarrangingthescheduleofthetourandmaystayintheirfancyplace(destination)aslongastheyliketoenjoythebeautifulscenery,togoshopping,ortoenjoysnacksofdifferenttastes,completelywithoutconsideringthelimitationoftime.⑤Inaddition,self-guidedtourmaytestandimprovepeople's,especiallytheyoungsters'determination,perseverance,confidenceandabilitiestodealwithdifficulties.
⑥Therefore,italldependsonwhatkindoftouronemaychoose.⑦IfIhaveenoughtimeandmoney,Iwillchooseself-guidedtourforfreedomandflexibility;however,iftimeislimitedandIwanttosaveenergy,perhapsIwillconsiderpackagetour.
【解析】
①总述人们在选择旅游方式上的矛盾，开篇用Whenever引导让步状语从句，让人眼前一亮。
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②陈述团队旅游的优点，综合运用同位语从句、定语从句等复杂句式，提升文章的档次。
③用Andwhat'smore表示递进，进一步陈述团队旅游的优点。
④用Onthecontrary进行自然过渡，引出对立的观点，句中综合使用定语从句、宾语从句排比句式等复杂句式，为文章增色。
⑤用Inaddition表示递进，进一步陈述自助旅游的优点，其中determination，perseverance为亮点同。
⑥用Therefore进行过渡，总结全文。
⑦借助however前后对比，陈述个人观点。
好句操练
★Peoplepreferringtogoonapackagetourholdtheopinionthat...a.Peoplewhoprefertogooilapackagetourarguethat...
b.Peoplewhoareinfavorofgoingonapackagetourmaintainthat...c.Peoplepreferringtogoonapackagetourinsistthat...
★Therefore,italldependsonwhatkindoftouronemaychoose.
a.Therefore,itisreallyhardtodeterminewhatkindoftouronemaychoose.
b.Therefore,it'snoeasyjobforpeopletodecidewhatkindoftourtochoose.
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