2022年大学英语六级满分作文赏析：关于手机思维导图

AbouttheMobilePhone

Humancreativenessisboundless.Withtheadvanceofscienceandtechnology,acompletelynewmeansofcommunication—theMobilePhone—cametotheworld,which,beingnotfixedinoneplacelikeordinaryphones,greatlyfacilitatestelephonecommunication.

Themobilephonespreadssorapidly,firstfrombusinessmentoofficeworkers,thentotownshipenterprisemanagers,thentojournalistsandthennowadaystopeopleofalltradesandprofessions.Atpresent,itseemsthatnowherewedonothearthemusicalringingofthemobilephone.Peopleatfirstbuyphonesforconvenienceandlaterforfashion.Tooccupythisincreasinglybigmarket,themanufacturersareworryingtheirbrainsintomakingvarioustypesofphones,largeorsmall,colouredorblackandwhite,multi-functionalorwithvideocameras,tosatisfytheneeds.Newfashionsappearalmosteveryday.

However,itisagreatpitythattheinventorsofthemobilephonedidnotexpectthenegativeeffectscausedbytheirscientificmerits.Becauseoftheabuseofthemobilephone,aircraftmechanismrefusestoworkproperly,librariesarenolongersoquiet,restaurantsarefilledwithnoisyphonetalk,teachingisincessantlyinterruptedbythesignals...

Here,inthepicture,aconcertisgoingon.ThepianistissupposedtobeplayingBeethoven'ssymphonywhen,allofasudden,amanwithatiestoodup,talkingloudlyoverhismobilephoneandtellinghisfriendthathewasattendingaconcertofclassicalmusic.Theaudienceshudderedwithpanicandthepianistwasnearlyshockedtodeath.

Itisnotinfrequentthattheabovescenehappensinpublicplaces.True,humanbeingshavetherighttoenjoymoderncivilization,nevertheless,shouldtheyknowhowtoconductthemselvesinthemoderncivilizedsociety?

·completelynewmeansofcommunication—theMobilePhone

·Therapidspreadingofthemobilephone

*Peoplewhousethephone

*Fromconveniencetofashion

*Themanufacturers

·Thenegativeeffectsofthephone,e.g.

·Theinterpretationofthecartoon

·Comments

本文为一篇图画作文,文体为议论文。作者就“移动电话”发表自己的看法。文章开头以“人类的创造力是无限的”一句引出移动电话的发明,继而在第二段中描述了移动电话的迅速发展。接着第三段笔锋一转,以However引出一段反面文章,略述移动电话的负面影响是发明者始料不及的,由此切入画面以为典型一例。结尾一段是作者的忠告—享受现代文明也得讲文明。

creativenessn.创造性

boundlessa.无限的

meansofcommunication通讯工具

notfixedinoneplace不固定在一处

facilitatev.使容易

townshipenterprise乡镇企业

journalistn.记者

peopleofalltradesandprofessions各行各业人士

nowherewedonot...我们无处不……(双重否定)

manufacturern.制造商,厂家

worryone'sbraininto绞尽脑汁,费尽心机

multi-functionala.多功能的

satisfyone'sneeds满足……要求

negativeeffect负效应

meritn.业绩,功绩

abusen.滥用

aircraftmechanism航空装置

incessantlyinterrupted不断被打断

concertn.音乐会

pianistn.钢琴家

allofasudden突然

shudderedwithpanic吓得发抖