2022年大学英语六级满分作文赏析：No Spitting思维导图

NoSpitting!

WithSARSgraduallypassingitspeak,moreandmorepeopletakeofftheirgauzemasks.Theyfeelreleasedandhavemorefreedomtobreatheinfreshair.However,acertainnumberofpeoplehaverestoredtheirbadhabitandstarttospiteverywhere.Nowandthen,whetherinthestreet,oronthebus,orincitygardens,wewillseesomepeople,thefineladiesandgentlemen,spittingwithoutfeelingabitashamedasshowninthepicture.Whenshownthe"nospitting!"sign,theyjustturnablindeyetoit.Stillworse,peoplearoundhavetobeonguardagainstthesuddenattackof"spitshot"fromthespitters.

Spittingisaterriblehabit.Foronething,itisentirelyuncivilized.Theworldhasenteredthe21stcenturyandhumancivilizationhasreachedamoreadvancedstage.Whycan'tthosepeopleremovethisuglyhabit?Isitbecausetheythinktheearthisagiganticspittoon?Foranotherthing,spittingdoesgreatharmtopublichealth.Accordingtochemicallaboratorytest,onesputumcontainsthousandsuponthousandsofgermsandSARSvirusesifthespitterisaSARSsufferer.Aswasreported,theBeijingmunicipalgovernmentoncemobilizedanarmyofathousandsanitationworkerstocleanoutthemessinTianAnMenSquare.

Forpeopletogetridofthisuncivilizedbehaviour,wesuggestlocalauthoritiesstrengtheneducationbypublicizingtheharmfulnessofspitting,andatthesametime,enforcethelawofpunishment.

Finally,we,citizensoftheearth,mustbeself-disciplined,loveourmotherearthanddon'tdirtyher.

·漫画描述

*SARS后的故伎重施

*当心“痰弹”

·陋习不改的原因与危害

*大地本身是个大痰盂吗?

*传播细菌和病毒

·建议

*加强教育

*重罚

*爱护大地母亲

本文为一篇议论文。文中作者就“不准随地吐痰”这一热门话题发表议论。文中第一段以漫画为依据揭示随地吐痰这一不文明现象;第二段主要批评这一陋习及其危害;第三、四段是建议和忠告。学习本文时应注意作者的构思技巧和语言表达。

takeofftheirgauzemasks卸下口罩

passingitspeak过了高峰期

feelreleased感到释然

restoretheirbadhabit恢复陋习

feelashamed感到惭愧

turnablindeyeto...对……视而不见

stillworse更糟糕的是

guardagainst提防

spittern.吐痰者

giganticspittoon大痰盂

sputumn.痰

virusn.病毒

municipalgovernment市政府

mobilizev.动员

anarmyofthousandsanitationworkers千名清洁工大军

cleanoutthemess清除痰迹

localauthorities当地政府

publicizev.宣传

enforcev.加强

self-disciplineda.自律

dirtyv.弄脏