2022年大学英语六级满分作文赏析：代沟思维导图

Thegenerationgap

代沟

Everynewgenerationisdifferentfromtheonethatprecededit.Todaythedifferenceisverymarkedindeed.

Oldpeoplearealwayssayingthattheyoungarenotwhattheywere.Thesamecommentismadefromgenerationtogenerationanditisalwaystrue.Ithasneverbeentruerthanitistoday.Theyoungarebettereducated.Theyhavealotmoremoneytospendandenjoymorefreedom.Theygrowupquicklyandarenotsodependentontheirparents.Theythinkmoreofthemselvesanddonotblindlyaccepttheideaoftheirelders.Eventswhichtheoldergenerationremembersvividlyarenothingmorethanpasthistory.

Justlookattheteenagegirlswhoscreamhystericallyoverthepopstarsandtheteenageboyswhocopythestarsandgrowtheirhairlongandarenolongerashamedofwearing"pretty"clothes,aresimplybreakingthroughthechinesetraditionalreserveandfearofshowingtheirfeelings.Whatismore,nowadaysmostboysandgirlsaregoodcompanionsandsomeofthemevenfallin"puppylove."Alotofolderpeoplesighandsay,"wedidnotusetodolikethis."

Doyouthinktheolderpeople'scriticismstemsfromjealousyjustbecausetheycouldnotordidnotbehaveinthesamewaywhentheywereyoung?

·paragraph1—thematicsentences

·paragraph2—commentsontheyoungfromtheoldgeneration

·paragraph3—howtheyoungconductthemselvesintheeyesoftheoldpeople

·paragraph4—aquestionforreaderstothinkabout

本文是一篇议论文。“代沟”是人们谈论得很多的话题,本文就这一话题发表一些议论。第一段引言即是全文的主题,第二段写出了老一代对年轻一代的看法,第三段主要议论年轻人的种种“反传统”的表现,结尾段提出了一个悬念性的问题,这样的结尾使人有别开生面之感,也是一种很好的写作手法。

precedev.在……之前，先于

markeda.明显的

theyoungarenotwhattheywere.年轻人变了

dependenton依赖

vividlyad.活生生地,生动地

nothingmorethanpasthistory不过是过去的历史

screamv.尖叫

hystericallyad.神经质地

copyv.模仿

growtheirhairlong留长发

beashamedof感到难为情

thechinesetraditionalreserveandfearofshowingtheirfeelings中国人传统的含蓄和羞于流露感情

puppylove早恋

sighv.叹气

didnotusetodolikethat过去不是这样做的

criticismn.批评

stemfrom根源于

jealousyn.忌妒